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More and more people do their shopping on internet. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion

More and more people do their shopping on internet. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion 0Aap3
At present many people tend to purchase things on online like flight tickets, books and required groceries which created online shopping more trending and popular with day to day life. Each coin has two sides, similarly internet shopping has its own pros and cons. Firstly, there are many advantages due to online shopping as we don't need to travel to get things which ultimately saves our time. For instance, During this pandemic of covid-19, many people couldn't go out get their things due to social distancing. Online Shopping have helped a lot to get things door to door including medicines. Secondly, This online shopping has created employment for many people who are needed with minimum set of educational requirements. In contrast, there are few disadvantages. We will not be able to see quality of products we buy. Some times people sent damaged peice and few don't even deliver the product. For example, we have many people complaining in review that they have received a damanged product and some upload a video that product was not delivered instead they have delivered only out box. But all this cases can be taken care by support team and get things by replacing. In conclusion, in my opinion we have more benefits with internet shopping which makes our lifes easy and better.
At present
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tend to
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purchase
things on
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online
like flight tickets, books and required groceries which created
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online
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shopping
more trending and popular with day to day life. Each coin has two sides,
similarly
internet
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shopping
has its
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own
pros and cons.

Firstly
, there are
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advantages due to
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online
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shopping
as we don't need to travel to
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get
things which
ultimately
saves our time.
For instance
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covid-19
,
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people
couldn't go out
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get
their things due to social distancing.
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Online
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Shopping
have
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helped
a lot to
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get
things door to door including medicines.

Secondly
, This
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online
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shopping
has created employment for
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many
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people
who
are needed
with minimum set of educational requirements.

In contrast
, there are few disadvantages. We will not be able to
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see
quality of
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products
we
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buy
.
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Some
times
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people
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sent
damaged
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peice
and few don't even deliver the
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product
.
For example
, we have
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people
complaining in review that they have received a
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damanged
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product
and
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some
upload a video that
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product
was not delivered
instead
they have delivered
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only
out box.
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But
all this cases can
be taken
care by support team and
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get
things by replacing.

In conclusion
, in my opinion we have more benefits with internet
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shopping
which
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makes
our
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lifes
easy and better.
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IELTS essay More and more people do their shopping on internet. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion

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