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Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this?

Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? 2bxlM
I hate wet and rainy days. It rained a lot in 1816. . . . a lot - like every day; the weather in Europe was abnormally wet because it rained in Switzerland on 130 out of the 183 days from April to September. If I was Mary Shelley I might decide to write a book too After all, it was the only thing you could do without TV or anything. She said that she "passed the summer of 1816 in the environs of Geneva. . . we occasionally amused ourselves with some German stories of ghosts. . . These tales excited in us a playful desire of imitation" So, people were stuck inside and bored. Mary Shelley decided to write a book because it was so awful outside. I can totally see her point, you know? I guess I would write a novel if there was nothing else to do.
I hate wet and rainy days.

It rained a lot in 1816.
.
.
.
a
lot
-
like every day; the weather in Europe was
abnormally
wet
because
it rained in Switzerland on 130 out of the 183 days from April to September. If I was Mary Shelley I might decide to write a book too
After all
, it was the
only
thing you could do without TV or anything. She said that she
"
passed the summer of 1816 in the environs of Geneva.
.
.
we
occasionally
amused ourselves with
some
German stories of ghosts.
.
.
These tales excited in us a playful desire of imitation
"
So
,
people
were stuck
inside and bored. Mary Shelley decided to write a book
because
it was
so
awful outside. I can
totally
see
her point, you know? I guess I would write a novel if there was nothing else to do.
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IELTS essay Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
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