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Why do you apply for Bachelor Of Arts in Language and Intercultural

Why do you apply for Bachelor Of Arts in Language and Intercultural QLK23
Group type of language institution always been in my preference since proficiency and dedication of mine is enhanced on point. Learning things that I fond of is very comprehensive and especially when I am decently good at it. Thus, if I happen to get to be in a fine environment, will surely perform and progress rapidly. Both of these thoughts will be discussed in the essay with relevant factor below Firstly, with things I fond of as I mention earlier are everything that Bachelor of Arts Program in Language and Intercultural Communication at Srinakharinwirot University has, Language has been taking over my life by how I liked and obsessed with it, although English often plays a major role in my life. Applying Chinese on the way of the journey is also interesting and so other languages
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institution always been in my preference since proficiency and dedication of mine
is enhanced
on point. Learning things that I fond of is
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very
comprehensive and
especially
when I am
decently
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good
at it.
Thus
, if I happen to
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get
to be in a fine environment, will
surely
perform and progress
rapidly
. Both of these thoughts will
be discussed
in the essay with relevant factor
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Firstly
, with things I fond of as I mention earlier are everything that Bachelor of Arts Program in
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Language
and Intercultural Communication at
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Srinakharinwirot
University has,
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Language
has been taking over my life by how I liked and obsessed with it, although English
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often
plays a major role in my life. Applying Chinese on the way of the journey is
also
interesting and
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so
other
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languages
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IELTS essay Why do you apply for Bachelor Of Arts in Language and Intercultural

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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