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More And More People Are Working At Home Rather Than In The Workplace. Some People Think This Will Bring Stress To Home

More And More People Are Working At Home Rather Than In The Workplace. Some People Think This Will Bring Stress To Home LB9Kp
An increasing number of people are choosing to work from home in recent years. While some people insist this trend is beneficial for the employees and their families, others argue that it causes unnecessary tension at home. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view. On the one hand, those who advocate that working from home is useful for the workers and families feel that it gives them the flexibility to work as per their convenience. This is because when they are not going to the job they need not follow the usual office hours. As a result, they choose to work at a time when their productivity is the highest. Furthermore, by not going to office, they save travelling time which can be utilized to work on their assignments and finish them early so that they can spend more time with their family members. On the other hand, for many reasons, I believe that this option leads to more tension in the family life. Firstly, there is no limit to how long one should sit and work at home. This absence of rules at home usually leads to people working longer than normal routine, which is one of the prime reasons for domestic fights. Secondly, people miss important informal communication that happens over tea in the office. For example, they may not get to hear about new vacancies that have arisen in the workplace. This can result in frustration and they might take this out on their family members. To conclude, although working from home provides one with the convenience of working at any time and the opportunity to spend more time with family I believe it can lead to tense situations at home because of lack of set rules and the chance to socialize with co-workers. Do you have an essay on this topic? Submit it below in the comments for a free band score estimate.
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are choosing to
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work
from home in recent years. While
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some
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people
insist this trend is beneficial for the employees and their
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families
, others argue that it causes unnecessary tension at home. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and
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my support for the latter view.

On the one hand, those who advocate that
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working
from home is useful for the workers and
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families
feel that it gives them the flexibility to
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work
as per their convenience. This is
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because
when they are not going to the job they need not follow the usual office hours.
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, they choose to
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work
at a
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time
when their productivity is the highest.
Furthermore
, by not going to office, they save travelling
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time
which can
be utilized
to
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work
on their assignments and finish them early
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so
that they can spend more
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time
with their
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family
members.

On the other hand
, for
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many
reasons, I believe that this option leads to more tension in the
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family
life.
Firstly
, there is no limit to how long one should sit and
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work
at home. This absence of
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rules
at home
usually
leads to
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people
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working
longer than normal routine, which is one of the prime reasons for domestic fights.
Secondly
,
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people
miss
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important
informal communication that happens over tea in the office.
For example
, they may not
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get
to hear about new vacancies that have arisen in the workplace. This can result in
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frustration and
they might take this out on their
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family
members.

To conclude
, although
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working
from home provides one with the convenience of
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working
at any
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time
and the opportunity to spend more
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time
with
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family
I believe it can lead to tense situations at home
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because
of lack of set
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rules
and the chance to socialize with co-workers. Do you have an essay on this topic? Submit it below in the comments for a free band score estimate.
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IELTS essay More And More People Are Working At Home Rather Than In The Workplace. Some People Think This Will Bring Stress To Home

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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