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More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person. (Example- banking, shopping,hotel booking etc.) Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages.

More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person. (Example- banking, shopping, hotel booking etc. ) Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages. lxOmJ
In this tremendously developing world, it is evident that with the advancement in technology plethora of people prefer to do work online instead individually. However, in my perspective merits of this phenomenon easily outweigh its demerits and the following essay will shed a light on. To commence with, there are numerous pros of doing tasks on internet. The main one is that, nowadays every individual has hectic schedule due to which time is not given by masses to do their tasks in person. Also, there are various applications on internet through which masses easily do their work in a short period of time. owing to this fact, such as goggle paytms and many other applications are available online in which folks can do their work from their homes. The another advantage of using internet more for work purpose is that, number of humans assertthat online they not only get huge variety of products but also with a good quality. To site an example, today's many sellers advertise their product online which looks attractive and people wants to buy those things immediately and also they believe that it is a way through which they saves their time. While considering the one disadvantage of this predicament. Somehow, because of online working people become introvert which put bad impact on their communication as well as social skills. Which would be very Dangerous for their future. To Encapsulate, after analysing the facts, it is clear that the pros of doing task online outweigh its cons. Because, internet makes its easy to do each and every work from home in a short period of time. On the contrary, it is also a deniable fact that internet makes individuals introvert.
In this
tremendously
developing world, it is evident that with the advancement in technology plethora of
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people
prefer to do
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work
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online
instead
individually
.
However
, in my perspective merits of this phenomenon
easily
outweigh its demerits and the following essay will shed a light on.

To commence with, there are numerous pros of doing tasks on internet. The main one is that, nowadays every individual has hectic schedule due to which time is not
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given
by masses to do their tasks in person.
Also
, there are various applications on internet through which masses
easily
do their
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work
in a short period of time.
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owing
to this fact, such as goggle
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paytms
and
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many
other applications are available
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online
in which folks can do their
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work
from their homes.

The another advantage of using internet more for
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work
purpose is that, number of humans
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assertthat
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online
they not
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only
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get
huge variety of products
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but
also
with a
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good
quality. To site an example,
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today
's
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many
sellers advertise their product
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online
which looks attractive and
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people
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wants
to
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buy
those things immediately and
also
they believe that it is a way through which they
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saves
their time.

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considering the one disadvantage of this predicament. Somehow,
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of
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online
working
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people
become introvert which put
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bad
impact on their communication
as well
as social
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skills
. Which would be
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for their future.

To Encapsulate, after
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analysing
the facts, it is
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that the pros of doing task
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outweigh its cons.
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, internet
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makes
its easy to do each and every
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work
from home in a short period of time.
On the contrary
, it is
also
a deniable fact that internet
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makes
individuals introvert.

IELTS essay More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person. (Example- banking, shopping, hotel booking etc. ) Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages.

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