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More and more people are using jnternet for chatting and shoping online. What are the negative and positive of this trend?

More and more people are using jnternet for chatting and shoping online. What are the negative and positive of this trend? 5AXmD
Using more and moee internet by masses for their different kinds of requirements like shoping and chatting 'Unboudtedly' has become a common teend in this contemperory era. Although there are plenty of causes behind this phenomenon, I opine that the negatives of this trend cannot be overlooked, and it is a negative development. To commence with, there are lot of facts that why individual refer to interact online. The first and the formost reaskn of doing this is time saving. To elaborate it more, it is an obvious thing that nowadays, people have their busy hectic schdule, and they do not have any time to do shoping or face to face communicate with their friends. Due to which, they buy new goods through internet websites, and they do not have to go anywhere for shopping. As a result, they can save their time. Moreover, they can not met face to face with their near and dears because of their work, owing to this, they like to communicate with them online. However, there are numbers of drawbacks of buying things online. Firstly, some companies show thrie bad products in exteremly good quality, which attract masses to buy them, and when they buy those products then, they face many difficulties regarding these products. Club factory, for instance, which is a online app for buying new products, and this compnay show their bad products in very good condition, but in the realty, the products of this company are totally damaged, and it is just aastage of money. To conclude, while there are many causes of buying thing online and chatting online by folks, I restate that the demerits of doing this dhould not be neglected.
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internet by masses for their
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different
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contemperory
era. Although there are
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plenty
of causes behind this phenomenon, I opine that the negatives of this trend cannot
be overlooked
, and it is a
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negative
development.

To commence with, there are
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lot of
facts that why individual refer to interact
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online
. The
first
and the
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formost
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reaskn
of doing this is time saving. To elaborate it more, it is an obvious thing that nowadays,
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people
have their busy hectic
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, and they do not have any time to do
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shoping
or
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face
to
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face
communicate with their friends. Due to which, they
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buy
new
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goods
through internet websites, and they do not
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have to
go anywhere for shopping.
As a result
, they can save their time.
Moreover
, they can not
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with their near and dears
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because
of their work, owing to this, they like to communicate with them online.

However
, there are numbers of drawbacks of buying things
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online
.
Firstly
,
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companies
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thrie
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bad
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products
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good
quality, which attract masses to
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them, and when they
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those
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products
then, they
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many
difficulties regarding these
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products
. Club factory,
for instance
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app for buying new
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, and this
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compnay
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their
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bad
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products
in
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very
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good
condition,
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in the realty, the
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are
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damaged, and it is
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of money.

To conclude
, while there are
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causes of buying thing
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online
and chatting
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online
by folks, I restate that the demerits of doing this
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dhould
not
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay More and more people are using jnternet for chatting and shoping online. What are the negative and positive of this trend?

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