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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.

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Nowadays, the majority of the public prefer private cars for travelling. This essay will suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is it increase greenhouse gases and then the government should encourage the people towards the public transportation as the most viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The foremost problem caused by relying on the private car is the it rise the level of carbon in the environment. The number of people is increasing who use their own vehicle and it leads to increase the vehicle on road. As a result large amount of the greenhouse gases emits into the air and will leads detrimental effects on the environment. Delhi is one of the victim of this situation, as recent reasearch showed that around 45% of the public used their own vehicle and it doubled the level of pollution in 2019 than in 2018. However, there are many ways to tackle such a problems, the most practical solution of this problem is a government sponsored awareness campaign to use more and more public transport. An effective advertising campaign should warn of the dangers of greenhouse gases and air polution and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. Germany is a prime example, the government of Germany offers free public transportation so that more people use that services and it also reduce public's monthly expenses on travel. In conclusion, increasing air polution casued by depends on personal vehicle is one of the foremost challenges we face but one possible solution could attract people towards public transportation through the government campaign and awareness programs.
Nowadays, the majority of the
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public
prefer private cars for travelling. This essay will suggest that the biggest
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problem
caused by this phenomenon is it increase greenhouse gases and then the
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government
should encourage the
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people
towards the
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public
transportation as the most viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

The foremost
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caused by relying on the private car is
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rise
the level of carbon in the environment. The number of
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people
is increasing who
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use
their
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own
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vehicle
and it leads to increase the
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on road.
As a result
large amount of the greenhouse gases emits into the air and will leads detrimental effects on the environment. Delhi is one of the victim of this situation, as recent
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reasearch
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showed
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public
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and it doubled the level of pollution in 2019 than in 2018.

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, there are
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ways to tackle such a
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, the most practical solution of this
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is a
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government
sponsored awareness campaign to
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more and more
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transport. An effective advertising campaign should warn of the
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dangers
of greenhouse gases and air
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polution
and
hopefully
, raise awareness amongst the
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public
. Germany is a prime example, the
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government
of Germany offers free
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public
transportation
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that more
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people
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public's monthly expenses on travel.

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by depends on personal
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is one of the foremost challenges we face
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one possible solution could attract
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towards
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transportation through the
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campaign and awareness programs.
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IELTS essay More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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