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More and more people are reading news from the internet, but some of the people likes reading news from a newspaper. Do you agree or disagree. v.1

More and more people are reading news from the internet, but some of the people likes reading news from a newspaper. v. 1
Newspapers have been one of the most popular mediums for fresh news all around the world. However, humans have been witnessing how the Internet changed the way news are delivered. While some people still found the newspapers were useful, some others caught the trend by reading news from the Internet. On the one hand, newspapers retained a certain amount of readers, despite the fast growth of the Internet. The fact is, there are hundreds million of people around the globe who are subscribing for the daily papers in their locality. It has been a tradition for everyone to read their morning paper while enjoying a cup of coffee or eating breakfast. One of the reasons is that the news was well researched and edited by writers and editors as a strictly traditional requirement. However, its drawback is on the lateness of news in which the printing and the delivery of the paper to readers and subscribers may take at least a day or later than expected. On the other hand, the Internet changed everything by allowing for almost zero cost of distributing content to readers. For instance, with a laptop or a computer and an internet connection, people will be able to read the freshest news from around the world. And after a decade that Internet has been used, online readers have grown considerably. Nevertheless, not all of the news sites or online news community are reviewed by editors to fit the standard, and hence, the reliability is often poor as a consequence. It requires readers spending more time to gather different information from various sources in order to have trustworthy news. Overall, both the newspapers and the news on the Internet have their own superiority in the way creating and distributing content to readers.
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Newspapers
have been one of the most popular mediums for fresh
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news
all around the world.
However
, humans have been witnessing how the Internet
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changed
the way
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news
are delivered
. While
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some
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people
still
found the
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newspapers
were useful,
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some
others
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caught
the trend by reading
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news
from the Internet.

On the one hand,
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newspapers
retained a certain amount of readers, despite the
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fast
growth of the Internet. The fact is, there are hundreds
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million
of
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people
around the globe who are subscribing for the daily papers in their locality. It has been a tradition for everyone to read their morning paper while enjoying a cup of coffee or eating breakfast. One of the reasons is that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
was well researched and edited by writers and editors as a
strictly
traditional requirement.
However
, its drawback is on the lateness of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
in which the printing and the delivery of the paper to readers and subscribers may take at least a day or later than
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expected
.

On the other hand
, the Internet
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changed
everything by allowing for almost zero cost of distributing content to readers.
For instance
, with a laptop or a computer and an internet connection,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will be able to read the freshest
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news
from around the world. And after a decade that Internet has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
, online readers have grown
considerably
.
Nevertheless
, not
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all of the
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news
sites or online
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news
community
are reviewed
by editors to fit the standard, and
hence
, the reliability is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
poor as a consequence. It requires readers spending more time to gather
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different
information from various sources in order to have trustworthy news.

Overall
, both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
and the
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news
on the Internet have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
superiority in the way creating and distributing content to readers.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay More and more people are reading news from the internet, but some of the people likes reading news from a newspaper. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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