We are already in industrialization era where many organizations are inventing a lot of types of measure that they can apply it in their work circumstances. Therefore, more companies have a tendency to permit their employees to work at home. I strongly believe their method will bring a buoyant development to their workers.
Firstly, by working at each employee house I believe it can boost up workers work. Moreover, their house circumstances are more likely to have a better vibe rather than their workplace, because support from family while we work at home are feeling more soothing rather than in their office. In addition, there was a survey conducted by Professor Thomas, Abigail from Harvard University. He asked many workers on his house circumstances to participate in his survey and the result is 65% of them are feeling more comfortable working at their own house, and 25% of them are feeling more comfortable working in their workplace. While, the remaining 10% say that they are having fun in both places.
Secondly, due to the fact that work in office can bring pressure and many kinds of unwell feelings. Therefore, many employees will accept the offer from their boss to work at their home because they can feel more relaxed and can work properly as they should. In addition, we can use our own measure to solve our work task. For example; I have a nephew, he is a programmer and currently he is a part of a famous programming office in USA. He always sits in front of his laptop every time he work and he never come to the office because he feels uncomfortable with the situation.
All in all, working at our own house can bring many merits. But it is depended on each individuals
We are already in industrialization era where
many
organizations are inventing
a lot of
types of measure that they can apply it in their
work
circumstances.
Therefore
, more
companies
have a tendency to permit their employees to
work
at home. I
strongly
believe their method will bring a buoyant development to their workers.
Firstly
, by
working
at each employee
house
I believe it can boost up workers
work
.
Moreover
, their
house
circumstances are more likely to have a better vibe
rather
than their workplace,
because
support from family while we
work
at home are
feeling
more soothing
rather
than in their
office
.
In addition
, there was a survey conducted by Professor Thomas, Abigail from Harvard University. He asked
many
workers on his
house
circumstances to participate in his survey and the result is 65% of them are
feeling
more comfortable
working
at their
own
house
, and 25% of them are
feeling
more comfortable
working
in their workplace.
While
, the remaining 10% say that they are having fun in both places.
Secondly
, due to the fact that
work
in
office
can bring pressure and
many
kinds of unwell
feelings
.
Therefore
,
many
employees will accept the offer from their boss to
work
at their home
because
they can feel more relaxed and can
work
properly
as they should.
In addition
, we can
use
our
own
measure to solve our
work
task.
For example
; I have a nephew, he is a programmer and
currently
he is a part of a
famous
programming
office
in USA
. He always sits in front of his laptop every time he
work and
he never
come
to the
office
because
he feels uncomfortable with the situation.
All in all,
working
at our
own
house
can bring
many
merits.
But
it
is depended
on each
individuals
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