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Montgomery’s life and that of her fictional character Anne

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To date, Canada has produced only one classic children’s tale to rank with Alice’s Adventures in wonderland and the works of Mark Twain; this was Lucy Maud Montgomery’s Anne of Green Gables. Lucy Maud Montgomery was born in Clinton, Prince Edward Island. Her mother died soon after her birth, and when her father went to Saskatchewan to assume a business position, she moved in with her grandparents in Cavendish, Prince Edward Island. There she went to school and later qualified to be a teacher. Montgomery wrote the Anne books while living in Cavendish and helping her grandmother at the post office. The first of the books, Anne of Green Gabbles, was published in 1908, and in the next three years she wrote two sequels. Like Montgomery, the heroine of the book is taken in by an elderly couple who lives in the fictional town of Avonlea, and Montgomery incorporated many events from her life in Cavendish into the Anne books. In 1911, Montgomery married Evan Macdonald and the couple soon moved to Ontario, where she wrote many other books. However, it was her first efforts that secured her prominence, and the Anne books are still read all around the world. Her novels have helped create a warm picture of Prince Edward Island’s special character. Several movies, a television series, and a musical play have been based on her tales, and today visitors scour the Island for locations described in the book.
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one classic children’s tale to rank with Alice’s Adventures in wonderland and the works of Mark Twain; this was Lucy Maud Montgomery’s Anne of Green Gables. Lucy Maud Montgomery
was born
in Clinton, Prince Edward
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. Her mother
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died
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soon
after her birth, and when her father went to Saskatchewan to assume a business position, she
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moved
in with her grandparents in Cavendish, Prince Edward
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Island
. There she went to school and later qualified to be a teacher.

Montgomery wrote the Anne
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books
while living in Cavendish and helping her grandmother at the post office. The
first
of the
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, Anne of Green Gabbles,
was published
in 1908, and in the
next
three years she wrote two sequels. Like Montgomery, the heroine of the
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book
is taken
in by an elderly couple who
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lives
in the fictional town of
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, and Montgomery incorporated
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from her life in Cavendish into the Anne books.

In 1911, Montgomery married Evan Macdonald and the couple
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soon
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moved
to Ontario, where she wrote
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many
other
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books
.
However
, it was her
first
efforts that secured her prominence, and the Anne
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books
are
still
read all around the world. Her novels have
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helped
create a warm picture of Prince Edward
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Island’s
special character. Several movies, a television series, and a musical play have
been based
on her tales, and
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today
visitors scour the
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Island
for locations
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described
in the
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IELTS essay Montgomery’s life and that of her fictional character Anne

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
241 words
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