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Discuss the adventages of travel

Discuss the adventages of travel ldVRQ
Traveling offers people an opportunity to visit interesting places, learn new things, and meet new people. It is one of the best ways to interact with people from other races, cultures, and ethnicities. Travelers explore the various beliefs and traditions that guide other people’s lives and learn how interconnected humanity is. Another advantage of traveling is the chance to learn, relax, and widen one’s scope of knowledge. In certain cases, one of the requirements of traveling abroad is learning the language that is used in the country that one intends to visit. Morever, traveling allows people to improve their communication skills and create networks that can be beneficial in their lives. Interacting with people who speak different languages and who have different cultures is challenging. However, it is important for the improvement of communication skills. Multicultural interaction is an important skill in the contemporary society especially due to globalization and technological advancements. Learning to interact with different cultures inculcates strong communication and social skills that are beneficial in personal and professional life
Traveling offers
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people
an opportunity to visit interesting places, learn new things, and
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meet
new
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people
. It is one of the best ways to interact with
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people
from other races, cultures, and ethnicities. Travelers explore the various beliefs and traditions that guide other
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people’s
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lives
and learn how interconnected humanity is. Another advantage of traveling is the chance to learn, relax, and widen one’s scope of knowledge. In certain cases, one of the requirements of traveling abroad is learning the language
that is
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used
in the country that one intends to visit.
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Morever
, traveling
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allows
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people
to
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improve
their communication
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skills
and create networks that can be beneficial in their
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lives
. Interacting with
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people
who speak
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different
languages and who have
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different
cultures is challenging.
However
, it is
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important
for the improvement of communication
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skills
. Multicultural interaction is an
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important
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skill
in the contemporary society
especially
due to globalization and technological advancements. Learning to interact with
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different
cultures inculcates strong communication and social
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skills
that are beneficial in personal and professional
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life
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IELTS essay Discuss the adventages of travel

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
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