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do you think internet is an invention or innovation?

do you think internet is an invention or innovation? XDbow
well, in my opinion we can use both of these words for talking about internet. let me explain it more. creation of new idea or concept is invention so Internet at the first was an invention. but this concept is not acceptable for it's first days so you need to improve it and combine it by new modern technology to introduce it to people. so people could use it with different ways. this time it would be an innovation. innovation involves with creativity and make this stuff more user-friendly than past. So Todays innovation helps internet to be available and vital among people.
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, in my opinion we can
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both of these words for talking about internet.
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creation
of new
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idea
or concept is invention
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Internet at the
first
was an invention.
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this concept is not acceptable for it's
first
days
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so
you need to
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improve
it and combine it by new modern technology to introduce it to
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people
.
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so
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people
could
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use
it with
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different
ways.
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this
time it would be an innovation.
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innovation
involves with creativity and
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make
this stuff more user-friendly than past.
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So
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Todays
innovation
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helps
internet to be available and vital among
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people
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IELTS essay do you think internet is an invention or innovation?

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