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Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.

Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live. y61M
Today we are living in the world of technology where people have numerous technology according to their need. One of the great innovation is a good transportation and shipping. Previously we did not have these facilities, when people had to go somewhere they use Bullock cart or horses and it took much time to reach on their destination. This transport service was not comfortable at all and it was time taking as well. But now we have many good option in transportation services for example, buses, car, bike, auto and from these services we save abundance of our time, and we can use this time in our productivity. People take the buses from bus stop according to their destination. And let's talk about the cab service personally I find this service very convenient it works with the mobile app you can book cab from at your or your working place or so on, it will come at your selective pick up point. Back in past thinking about going out of country is like impossible due to unavailability of air transportation but now air plane service not out of reach even for middle class people, air plan service is affordable for travelling in your own country as well. Trains are also a good innovation on the contrary in my opinion it is bit time-consuming process for example, train take 8 to 10 hours for 8 hundred mil distance and with air service you can reach in 1 hours this is enormous advantages of air service. I would say this human innovation make the life of human easy. We can reach anywhere in few hours and send anything to our loved one even they are in out country.
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IELTS essay Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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