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Modern technology that you own

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I have several pieces of modern technology and electronic gadgets that I often use. Among them, I would like to talk about the ipad I have. It is a tablet by the renowned brand HP and it’s a gift which my mom gave me for my 10th birthday. This laptop comes with a moderately latest configuration, and it supports all major latest software. In addition, it is equipped an camera, so it’s allow me to take many photos of memorable moments in my life. I often use it to read books, surf the internet, . . . . Since I got it, I have read a lot of important and useful information. In addition, I often use it to take photos when I travel because it’s small and easy to hold. This electronic device is really important to me mainly because it allows me to take care of many of my office tasks at home at my convenience as my job is really demanding. Besides, it saves me a lot of time by helping me to find important information during emergency time and situations

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