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Modern society benefits greatly from technology

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Modern society benefits greatly from technology. However, everything has two sides and technology that can identify human emotions is not an exception. It is thought that equipment and application technology could be useful in our life. Despite the fact that millions of people criticize it. On the one hand, we must acknowledge that this device can read the facial expressions as they approach. In Japan, they invented Pepper which is capable of recognizing basic human emotions and responding. For example, it comforts someone when it senses the person is sad, or cracks a joke when the person is feeling playful. In addition, emotion sensing technology has been used in healthcare at hospitals in the world. That can give us medicine when we feel physically sick and tired of worry. Nevertheless, it clearly can be seen that it is a challenge in order to have an accurate people’s face recognition device. Results of the emotion sensing technology bases on accuracy of the sensors such as cameras, digital recordings and so on. It will be very expensive because of using of costly components in these devices. In conclusion, in spite of the advantages of enhancing and improving the overall quality of life for the people of modern people’s moods recognition devices, I am convinced that it is better to naturally take place without a need for technology to be able to recognize emotions.
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greatly
from
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technology
.
However
, everything has two sides and
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technology
that can identify human
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emotions
is not an exception. It is
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thought
that equipment and application
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technology
could be useful in our life. Despite the fact that millions of
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people
criticize it.

On the one hand, we
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must
acknowledge that this device can read the facial expressions as they approach. In Japan, they invented Pepper which is capable of recognizing basic human
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emotions
and responding.
For example
, it comforts someone when it senses the person is sad, or cracks a joke when the person is feeling playful.
In addition
,
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emotion
sensing
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technology
has been
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used
in healthcare at hospitals in the world. That can give us medicine when we feel
physically
sick and tired of worry.

Nevertheless
, it
clearly
can be
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seen
that it is a challenge in order to have an accurate
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people’s
face recognition device. Results of the
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emotion
sensing
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technology
bases on accuracy of the sensors such as cameras, digital recordings and
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so
on. It will be
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very
expensive
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because
of using of costly components in these devices.

In conclusion
,
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in spite of
the advantages of enhancing and improving the
overall
quality of life for the
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people
of modern
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people’s
moods recognition devices, I
am convinced
that it is better to
naturally
take place without a need for
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technology
to be able to recognize
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emotions
.
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IELTS essay Modern society benefits greatly from technology

Essay
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