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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? 589e
Message conveying protocols have changed drastically over decades. As the time evolves the communication medium shaped positive. There is a group of number who think that hand written old traditional techniques were better and showed passion and care to the readers. I believe that the digital channels of interaction are easy, convenient to use and accessible. To begin with, Technology has gone too far to develop the different norm in human life, at first pigeons were used as a way to communicate. Later on the advancement in phones and computer made things look quick and efficient. Now a day’s people use email or collection of different social media apps to know each other, apparently this way of sending message over turned the value of hand written letters and cards. Majority of young adults think that it is waste of time to write a letter and to wait for couple of months to get their return response. Somehow, this also indicates the busy life of the people belongs to modern era. Although, the user of using emails or SMS are increasing day by day, but there are still few individual who believes that written letter and cards shows more importance and relevance to anyone, one will take some time out from their busy life, to write their well being. However, the large proportion of thinkers still feels that high technology is quick and reachable way to adopt than the traditional method. To summarize this debate, I would like to put my views as using digital channel is better and fast reachable. Since every other individual is busy and want to know about their family and friends frequently than to receive once in a month or two. When the technology is accomplishing wonders, than why hesitate using this positive side of our electromagnetic era.
Message conveying protocols have
changed
drastically
over decades.
As
the time evolves the communication medium shaped
positive
. There is a group of number who
think
that
hand written
old
traditional techniques were better and
showed
passion and care to the readers. I believe that the digital channels of interaction are easy, convenient to
use
and accessible.

To
begin
with, Technology has gone too far to develop the
different
norm in human life, at
first
pigeons were
used
as a way to communicate. Later on the advancement in phones and computer made things look quick and efficient.
Now
a day’s
people
use
email or collection of
different
social media apps to know each other,
apparently
this way of sending message over turned the value of
hand written
letters and cards. Majority of young adults
think
that it is waste of time to write a letter and to wait for
couple of
months to
get
their return response. Somehow, this
also
indicates the busy life of the
people
belongs to modern era.

Although, the user of using emails or SMS are increasing day by day,
but
there are
still
few individual who believes that written letter and cards
shows
more importance and relevance to anyone, one will take
some
time out from their busy life, to write their
well being
.
However
, the large proportion of thinkers
still
feels that high technology is quick and reachable way to adopt than the traditional method.

To summarize
this debate, I would like to put my views as using digital channel is better and
fast
reachable. Since every other individual is busy and want to know about their family and friends
frequently
than to receive once in a month or two. When the technology is accomplishing wonders,
than
why hesitate using this
positive
side of our electromagnetic era.
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IELTS essay Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement?

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