The issue of whether or not children should be engaged in some paid work has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that having some employment experience is conducive to a child’s learning and development, I contend that it would bring harm to the child’s heath and learning.
First of all, a workplace designed for adults is normally shortage of child-friendly facilities. Desks and chairs are too high for a child; the light switches are installed on the walls unreachable by children; also emergency training and facilities such as phones are only provided to adults. Furthermore, various hazards such as polluted air and chemical fumes are still produced in factories and farms. Undoubtedly young people would suffer in such workplaces. Also, children would find it frustrating when they are not properly inducted before starting a job. A child working in a cement factory would feel a setback when he could not get immediate support while struggling with the procedures of recording different raw materials that is required by the job. Further, without sufficient support, a child’s misunderstanding or inappropriately communicating with adults would only disappoint him and prevents him from active learning and interacting with other people.
To conclude, a child’s paid employment experience would lead to a negative impact on their health and active learning. However, recognizing the importance of children’s learning and their awareness of responsibility, it is advisable to encourage them to be involved in some volunteering opportunities where they can meaningfully learn and interact with other people with sufficient care and support in place for such jobs. 
The issue of  
whether or not
  children
 should  
be engaged
 in  
some
 paid work has sparked a heated debate. While  
some
 argue that having  
some
 employment experience is conducive to a  
child’s
  learning
 and development, I contend that it would bring harm to the  
child’s
 heath and learning. 
First of all
, a workplace designed for adults is  
normally
 shortage of child-friendly facilities. Desks and chairs are too high for a  
child
; the light switches  
are installed
 on the walls unreachable by  
children
;  
also
 emergency training and facilities such as phones are  
only
 provided to adults.  
Furthermore
, various hazards such as polluted air and chemical fumes are  
still
 produced in factories and farms.  
Undoubtedly
 young  
people
 would suffer in such workplaces.  
Also
,  
children
 would find it frustrating when they are not  
properly
 inducted  
before
 starting a job. A  
child
 working in a cement factory would feel a setback when he could not  
get
 immediate support while struggling with the procedures of recording  
different
 raw materials that  
is required
 by the job.  
Further
, without sufficient support, a  
child’s
 misunderstanding or  
inappropriately
 communicating with adults would  
only
 disappoint him and  
prevents
 him from active  
learning
 and interacting with other  
people
. 
To conclude
, a  
child’s
 paid employment experience would lead to a  
negative
 impact on their health and active  
learning
.  
However
, recognizing the importance of  
children’s
  learning
 and their awareness of responsibility, it is advisable to encourage them to  
be involved
 in  
some
 volunteering opportunities where they can  
meaningfully
 learn and interact with other  
people
 with sufficient care and support in place for such jobs.