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Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. n61pe
Due to modrenlization and with the sudden development in agriculture advancement, many nations have allowed to constructions new buildings in the countries that have significant changes the charcter and appearance of cities. The government can be develop these new building in traditional style. To begin with, a palthora people think that when nations develop new modern building in the nation then it help to attract to visitors for visiting the countries. There is not denying that rises more infrastructure is enessial for development in the nation. For example, India is a developing nation and Indian government develops many new statues and memorial buildings in India. These building constructed by modern technologies which is the main reason new visitors visited India for 3 years. Moving further, others think that government should be built new buildings in traditional styles and rebursment the traditional buildings. These could be represent the nation culture and traditions. It will be help to save our culture and grow the economy of the nations. In my opinion, modern designs buildings is play crucial role in economy of the nations. It is important to develop new buildings with latest technology but government should be constructions these buildings in epic styles with modern techiques. It will help to help to strong their infrastructure. So, traditional buildings structure is esseical in the nation. In conclusion, with the rapid growth in agricultural and factories which is reason increase their infrastructure and government could be constructed these in tradition styles.
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modrenlization
and with the sudden development in agriculture advancement,
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have
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allowed
to constructions
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new
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buildings
in the countries that have significant
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changes
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charcter
and appearance of cities. The
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government
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develop
these
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new
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building
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traditional
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style
. To
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palthora
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people
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nations
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develop
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modern
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building
in the
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then it
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help
to attract to visitors for visiting the countries. There
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is not denying
that rises more infrastructure is
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for development in the
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.
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, India is a developing
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nation
and Indian
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government
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develops
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and memorial
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buildings
in India. These
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building
constructed by
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modern
technologies which is the main reason
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new
visitors visited India for 3 years. Moving
further
, others
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think
that
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government
should
be built
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traditional
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styles
and
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traditional
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buildings
. These could be
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represent
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nation
culture and traditions. It will be
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help
to save our culture and grow the economy of the
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nations
. In my opinion,
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modern
designs
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buildings
is play crucial role in economy of the
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nations
. It is
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to
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latest
technology
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in epic
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styles
with
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modern
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techiques
. It will
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help
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help
to strong their infrastructure.
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,
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traditional
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structure is
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esseical
in the
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.
In conclusion
, with the rapid growth in agricultural and factories which is reason increase their infrastructure and
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government
could
be constructed
these in tradition
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styles
.
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IELTS essay Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.

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