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Mobile phone and internet may have easier contact with other people however has the loss of time using the telephone less is the growing the communication positive and negative development in the society

Mobile phone and internet may have easier contact with other people however has the loss of time using the telephone less is the growing the communication positive and negative development in the society 2K7qX

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