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Not all drivers of obey the law while driving on?what are the reason for this?what can be done to fix this problem?

Not all drivers of obey the law while driving on? what are the reason for this? what can be done to fix this problem? j8Njd
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because
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people
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that it in this modern era
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many
drivers do not follow the
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and regulations while
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their vehicle there and various
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Qazi
is along with measurements

To commence with there are several reasons of
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driving
do not obey the traffic
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rules
to elaborate it the major issue is an educated
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because
one do not know about their laws and those are not able to
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signboard that stated on the roads up on two masses do not learn those signs despite these
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rules
are normal and message do not care about
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individuals
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think
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small
amount of penalty
as well
as loss are not suspect
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drivers are
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driving
via transport without an exam be a fool and regulations
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because
drivers believe that cops cannot
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stop
them

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more there are several solutions to solve this Abhishek obstacle
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real life
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solutions such as said find all those
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conditions for making
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IELTS essay Not all drivers of obey the law while driving on? what are the reason for this? what can be done to fix this problem?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
5.5
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