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I took part in a competition about 2 months ago from now. It was the time of the annual sporting event for student, and I took part in a national competition named VUG8. It’s a football league. By the way, football was the only sport that I enjoyed playing back then. However, needless to say, I wasn’t really very good at playing football even though I had a passion for it. So, I started to do exercise and running early in the morning to increase my fitness level. The league started with the fitst match. The competition iinitiates with the first match against University of Transport Technology team. Unfortynately, my team was lose. The next match, we played against a strong opponents and we kept losing. In the third match, we won luckily with score 1-0. After 3 matches, we were eliminated although we tried our best. Anyway, I also felt so good, when my fellow team members were cheering me and encouraging me to play well because it made me confident about my ability.

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took part
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took part
 in a national competition named VUG8. It’s a football league. By the way, football was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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good
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started
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started
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match
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Unfortynately
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lose
. The next
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match
, we played against a strong Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).opponents, and
opponents and
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kept
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match
, we won luckily with score 1-0. After 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
matches
, we were eliminated
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so
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good
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because
 it made me confident about my ability. 