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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. RKDG
The expenses of exploring space are massive huge, and problem occur on earth require attention. The notions about the exploring mission needed to be reduced are agreeable or disagreeable. In my opinion, I disagree with the thought of reducing the journey to space although it required so much attention and a large amount of money. Because exploring space will bring us an immense idea about how the outside world is functioning. More exploring will gives us more experience beyond what we can imagine, as it requires attention to discovering new things will help to encourage space, so people will get more attention. Space helps us to alarm the world when something entering the earth atmosphere by putting satellite. we can now know how the world looks like and its movement such as the earth revolving around the sun, also the shape looks like a spherical shape which is known by the whole world. By identifying the function of space the scientist can discover the theory of most of everything. When someone knew the earth the explorer already discovered the universe and there are nine planets in our universe which we can even name and describe the size and distance from our planet. Nevertheless, we have Neil Armstrong the first person who landed on the moon in 1999 which is launched by NASA and found that people will not be able to live or settle on the moon. By 21 century NASA launched mars discovering the planet whether living is possible for human or not, for more year of exploring they found out that there is water so thinking living might be possible on Mars. We have a long year journey to discover space and find out more interesting things in the universe, so it worth spending money on that.
The expenses of
exploring
space
are massive huge, and problem occur on
earth
require attention. The notions about the
exploring
mission needed to be
reduced
are agreeable or disagreeable.

In my opinion, I disagree with the
thought
of reducing the journey to
space
although it required
so
much attention and a large amount of money.
Because
exploring
space
will bring us an immense
idea
about how the outside world is functioning. More
exploring
will gives us more experience beyond what we can imagine, as it requires attention to discovering new things will
help
to encourage
space
,
so
people
will
get
more attention.

Space
helps
us to alarm the world when something entering the
earth
atmosphere by putting satellite.
we
can
now
know how the world looks like and its movement such as the
earth
revolving around the sun,
also
the shape looks like a spherical shape which
is known
by the whole world.

By identifying the function of
space
the scientist can discover the theory of
most of everything
. When someone knew the
earth
the explorer already discovered the universe and there are nine planets in our universe which we can even name and
describe
the size and distance from our planet.

Nevertheless
, we have Neil Armstrong the
first
person who landed on the moon in 1999 which
is launched
by NASA and found that
people
will not be able to
live
or settle on the moon. By
21 century
NASA launched
mars
discovering the planet whether living is possible for human or not, for more year of
exploring
they found out that there is water
so
thinking living might be possible on Mars.

We have a long year journey to discover
space
and find out more interesting things in the universe,
so
it worth
spending money on that.
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IELTS essay Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.

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