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Men and women prefer to have child late in lide.what are the reason ans impact of it

Men and women prefer to have child late in lide. what are the reason ans impact of it Eqprq
It is well said that children are the backbone and future of any nation so having child lately has been privilege concern in a significant part of world. The decision of having child is totally depends on their parents education and carrier plays pivotal role in it. The ensuring paragraph would elucidate what are the cause of this situation and there influences. To commence with the first and foremost cause of having child lately is carrier. Parents choose to secure their and their child future so they more to earn and lately they decide for the child. Secondly, millions of students migrate to foreign for vast education and knowledge, apart from it they prefer to earn for family so when they back to there nation they able to marry and have child. Last but not least in modern era, girls also prefer to study as a child result they select marry late. Shifting towards the impact of this problem on family and society. Firstly communication gap would take place due to generation gap. Lack of mutual understanding can be observed in results of having late child. Secondly, children born with old parents well born with some consequences. To conclude with, many technology has developed so parents can give birth to child in middle age even, hence it better to focus more on securing future of their and their future child.
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of any nation
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having
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lately has been privilege concern in a significant part of world. The decision of
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having
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child
is
totally
depends on their
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parents
education and carrier plays pivotal role in it. The ensuring paragraph would elucidate what are the cause of this situation and
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there
influences. To commence with the
first
and foremost cause of
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having
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child
lately is carrier.
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Parents
choose to secure their and their
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child
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future
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so
they more to earn and lately they decide for the
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child
.
Secondly
, millions of students migrate to foreign for vast education and knowledge, apart from
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it
they prefer to earn for family
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so
when they back to
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nation
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they
able to marry and have
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child
. Last
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but
not least in modern era, girls
also
prefer to study as a
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child
result they select marry late. Shifting towards the impact of this problem on family and society.
Firstly
communication gap would take place due to generation gap. Lack of mutual understanding can
be observed
in results of
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having
late
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child
.
Secondly
, children born with
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old
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parents
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well born
with
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some
consequences.
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with,
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many technology
has developed
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so
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parents
can give birth to
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child
in middle age even,
hence
it better to focus more on securing
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future
of their and their
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IELTS essay Men and women prefer to have child late in lide. what are the reason ans impact of it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
230 words
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