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Crucially,The state needs to take some measures, for people with different nationalities and races to live hormonally with others in one country.First up all, introduce laws on foreign citizens and protect their rights.As a result,the rights of humans with various religion and nationality will be equal. Secondly,to construct moques and churches for external people according to their faith.It will help them to live comfortably and without need. To sum up, I believe that foreigh people will live harmonical with the help of state ensurance

Crucially, The state needs to take some measures, for people with different nationalities and races to live hormonally with others in one country. First up all, introduce laws on foreign citizens and protect their rights. As a result, the rights of humans with various religion and nationality will be equal. Secondly, to construct moques and churches for external people according to their faith. It will help them to live comfortably and without need. To sum up, I believe that foreigh people will live harmonical with the help of state ensurance m82dO
Crucially, The state needs to take some measures, for people with different nationalities and races to live hormonally with others in one country. First up all, introduce laws on foreign citizens and protect their rights. As a result, the rights of humans with various religion and nationality will be equal. Secondly, to construct moques and churches for external people according to their faith. It will help them to live comfortably and without need. To sum up, I believe that foreigh people will live harmonical with the help of state ensurance
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, The state needs to take
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nationalities and races to
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live
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up all, introduce laws on foreign citizens and protect their rights.
As a result
, the rights of humans with various religion and nationality will be equal.
Secondly
, to construct
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moques
and churches for external
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people
according to their faith. It will
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help
them to
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live
comfortably
and without need.

To sum up, I believe that
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foreigh
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people
will
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live
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harmonical
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help
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ensurance
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IELTS essay Crucially, The state needs to take some measures, for people with different nationalities and races to live hormonally with others in one country. First up all, introduce laws on foreign citizens and protect their rights. As a result, the rights of humans with various religion and nationality will be equal. Secondly, to construct moques and churches for external people according to their faith. It will help them to live comfortably and without need. To sum up, I believe that foreigh people will live harmonical with the help of state ensurance

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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