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Memories of daily journal to remember

Memories of daily journal to remember p5Dow
This is my daily journal and just started today to make improve my vocabulary to prepare myself for taking the IELTS this coming July. I felt a little bit anxious and nervous just thinking about it. A lot coming through into my mind like questions the instructor will ask what topic to write in the essay and the most nerve-wracking is the face-to-face question and answer especially that I’m not a native speaker, English is not our first language. In the Philippines, many languages in every province have many dialects. Somewhat it's not easy and hard like going back to school learning and studying from the very beginning. But hopefully, I can get the band I want and I’ll do all my best even though for sure nervousness is there w/c unavoidable especially that I’m not accustoming but also with prayers, I can make it! Same as usual today routine life goes ongoing to work and after coming back home take a nap and writing my journal. Nothing special today except that it's my close’s friend birthday. I greeted her through messenger and chit-chat a little since she’s busy as well. She’s a high school Chemistry teacher same as her mom but auntie already retired, she’s the one who replaced her. Luckily, that I’m not busy today at least I took a rest for a while unlike yesterday I was really exhausted since the samples kept on coming non-stop only the good thing only a few stat patients the rest are all routine. Sadly, though routine but all have urinalysis request had to do manually compared to have automated just place the sample machine will process and afterwards wait for the result. That’s all folks. Tomorrow is another day and let's see what lies ahead and my birthday is near I don’t want to think. Journal ends.
This is my daily journal and
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to
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my vocabulary to prepare myself for taking the IELTS this
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July. I felt a
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anxious and nervous
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thinking about it. A lot
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through into my mind like questions the instructor will ask what topic to write in the essay and the most nerve-wracking is the face-to-face question and answer
especially
that I’m not a native speaker, English is not our
first
language. In the Philippines,
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many
languages in every province have
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many
dialects. Somewhat it's not easy and
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hard
like going back to school learning and studying from the
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beginning.
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But
hopefully
, I can
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get
the band I want and I’ll do all my best
even though
for sure nervousness is there w/c unavoidable
especially
that I’m not accustoming
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but
also
with prayers, I can
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make
it!

Same as usual
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routine life goes ongoing to work and after
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back home take a nap and writing my journal. Nothing special
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today
except that it's my close’s friend birthday. I greeted her through messenger and chit-chat a
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little
since she’s busy
as well
. She’s a high school Chemistry teacher same as her mom
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auntie already retired, she’s the one who replaced her. Luckily, that I’m not busy
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today
at least I took a rest for a while unlike yesterday I was
really
exhausted since the samples
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on
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non-
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the
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thing
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a few stat patients the rest are all routine.
Sadly
, though routine
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but
all have urinalysis request had to do
manually
compared to have automated
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just
place the sample machine will process and afterwards wait for the result.

That’s all folks. Tomorrow is another day and
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what lies ahead and my birthday is near I don’t want to
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think
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IELTS essay Memories of daily journal to remember

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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