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My daily routine life that I need to endure

My daily routine life that I need to endure 1aP2M
It’s been three days since I haven’t updated my diary and plenty of things happened. I went in the triage to reading the PPD after 2 days of the injection, wait for the holidays to finish, and submit the form. Reaching home around midnight I hurriedly take off my scrubs to clean the toilet, and I was almost done at 1 a. m. Took a shower before going to bed and I felt exhausted and totally drained. Despite it, I can’t sleep at all so, I decided to watch TikTok or Youtube until drowsiness will consume me. But on the contrary, the effect is the opposite instead I fall asleep around 3 a. m. only. Woke up in the morning to prepare for lunch and get ready to go to work. It’s great that my hubby is evening shifts as well-so, I don’t need to walk we’ll just drop by my daughter to a babysitter. I felt awful about my senior who was my former and current colleague. Hard to fathom his way of thinking, one way or another he keeps on changing his decisions not sticking to one only. He won't have a word of honor and a double-faced kind of person. To divert my anger I called Marfe to have a pleasant conversation and it works, I became calmed and relaxed after the talk. Luckily, I’m not busy I have the time to chat with her. Unexpectedly, when the van arrives in the main hospital the senior whom I don’t want to see is there. He’s waiting for his wife to come from another satellite since she didn’t drive. No choice, I put a façade towards him as if nothing happened. My eyes are becoming heavy and want to go to bed right now, I'll it end here for tonight.
It’s been three days since I haven’t updated my diary and
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plenty
of things happened. I went in the triage to reading the PPD after 2 days of the injection, wait for the holidays to finish, and submit the form. Reaching home around midnight I
hurriedly
take off my scrubs to clean the toilet, and I was almost done at 1 a. m. Took a shower
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before
going to bed and I felt exhausted and
totally
drained. Despite it, I can’t sleep at all
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so
, I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
TikTok or
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Youtube
until drowsiness will consume me.
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But
on the contrary
, the effect is the opposite
instead
I fall asleep around 3 a. m.
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only
.

Woke up in the morning to prepare for lunch and
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get
ready to go to work. It’s great that my hubby is evening shifts
as well
-
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so
, I don’t need to walk we’ll
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just
drop by my daughter to a babysitter.

I felt awful about my senior who was my former and
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current
colleague.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Hard
to fathom his way of thinking, one way or another he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keeps
on changing his decisions not sticking to one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
. He won't have a word of honor and a double-faced kind of person. To divert my anger I called
Possible spelling mistake found.
Marfe
to have a pleasant conversation and it works, I became calmed and relaxed after the talk. Luckily, I’m not busy I have the time to chat with her.
Unexpectedly
, when the van arrives in the main hospital the senior whom I don’t want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
is there. He’s waiting for his wife to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from another satellite since she didn’t drive. No choice, I put a façade towards him as if nothing happened. My eyes are becoming heavy and want to go to bed right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I'll it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
here for tonight.
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IELTS essay My daily routine life that I need to endure

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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