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Meeting friends after working hard a year

Meeting friends after working hard a year 6qmG

On the 4th anniversary of the Lunar of January, which marked our gathering day to meet the significant person who is my teacher. We were together at her place, too, like our home to laugh, eat and play pocker. There were a lot of bullshit stories spoken about, but it was the stories made us forget the rough stuff that had happened in the years before. We are going to continue and keep going and wish my old friends at high school will see my status sweetening the bond together.

On the 4th anniversary of The phrase 'the Lunar of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the Lunar of
 January, which marked our gathering day to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the significant person who is my teacher. We were together at her place, too, like our home to laugh, eat and play Possible spelling mistake found.pocketlockerpokerrockerpickerpacker
pocker
. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 bullshit stories spoken about, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was the stories made us forget the rough stuff that had happened in the years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. We are going to continue and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 going and wish my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 friends at high school will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my status sweetening the bond together. 