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Medicine personal statement

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The thing that sparked my interest in medicine is my favourite subject in school. I get so excited every time when I have Biology class, the most interesting part for me is Human biology. When I was young I suffered from allergies, My mom had to take me to hospital many times a month to get treatment. Biology is the subject the can make me figure out about my body system and how it works. Since I knew that I have passion on medical, I always try to find a way to increase my dream to be comes true. Starting with studying in school, I keep study harder and harder every time that I think about myself wearing white coat and providing healthcare to my patients. However, to be a doctor is not that easy, I additionally learning outside classroom to gain my knowledge not only academic but also skills that will help me grow into successful doctor. Instead of going out with my friends when I have free time, I volunteer myself to help people in hospital and apply to the competition in school to work in Pathology major and had been selected as a trainee. With my knowledge, my keenness to work and my work experience I trustfully that studying medicine is the right choice for me.

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