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What foods to reduce acne

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acne is a skin problem that can cause several types of bumps to form on the surface of the skin and anywhere such as: shoulders, back, … diet excerbates your skin and certain foods raise your blood sugar more quickly than others and it causes the body to release a hormone called insulin what increasing your risks of acne. And these foods are considered high carbohydrate is a culprit of this problem. due to, eating foods contain the following ingredients: vitamin A and E, the mineral zinc…is of benefit to your skin. Some skin - friendly food choices you can try include: yellow and orange fruits and vegetables such as carrots, apricot, blueberries or high- quality protein like salmon, tofu. . Avoid high- sugar foods and beverages as much as possible because it can trigger you skin worse than original.
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acne
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problem that can cause several types of bumps to form on the surface of the
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skin
and anywhere such as: shoulders, back, …

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diet
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excerbates
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skin
and certain
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foods
raise your blood sugar more
quickly
than others and it causes the body to release a hormone called insulin what increasing your
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risks
of acne. And these
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foods
are considered
high carbohydrate is a culprit of this problem.

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due
to, eating
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foods
contain the following ingredients: vitamin A and E, the mineral zinc…is of benefit to your
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skin
.
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Some
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skin
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friendly
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food
choices you can
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try include
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and beverages as much as possible
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IELTS essay What foods to reduce acne

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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