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In a modern world marketing and promotions are essential to the corporative business, advertising is a key part of modern business. I strongly agree with these statements and this essay will discuss how marketing and promotions are important to the business and how could affect individuals' lives. On the one hand, people are ready to opt for whatever they want, with companies gives promotions and marketing for a product individuals will be more aware of the products and values. campaigning products also give companies customer preferences and aptitudes. For instance, promoting eco-friendly commodities such as toothpaste and toiletries will save the environment which using natural resources and remedies instead of chemicals and plastics this will create many choices for customers, which people are more aware of environmental threats causing some products and industries. in my impression advertising is modern art as well as it could create many industries more employments, also these days customers are enjoying advertisement in a visual world. On the other hand, despite all the promotions and marketing, companies main priorities should be about the quality of their product, the top-notch commodities and reasonable prices and good promotions will steer the Industries into a successful and make more turnovers, also companies should not compromise about the quality of products when it comes to markets. further more children can easily be influenced by advertising, as a result, it could lead some parents more pressure to buy expensive stocks. in additionally promoting and marketing fairy products include glamorous and successful people are involving this product advertisement may have unfavourable aspects which may split the society discriminated by the colour, the government can solve this issues by giving the sensor to all marketing and advertising. To conclude, all individuals are living in a consumer cultural world. the advertising and promotion are essential to the industries, also it's could give the awareness of the products and information about the commodities for the customers.
In a modern world
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marketing
and promotions are essential to the
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corporative
business, advertising is a key part of modern business. I
strongly
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agree
with these statements and this essay will discuss how
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marketing
and promotions are
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important
to the business and how could affect individuals'
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lives
.

On the one hand,
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people
are ready to opt for whatever they want, with
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companies
gives promotions and
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marketing
for a
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product
individuals will be more aware of the
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products
and values.
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campaigning
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products
also
give
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companies
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customer
preferences and aptitudes.
For instance
, promoting eco-friendly commodities such as toothpaste and toiletries will save the environment which using natural resources and remedies
instead
of chemicals and plastics this will create
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many
choices for
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customers
, which
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people
are more aware of environmental threats causing
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some
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products
and
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industries
.
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in
my impression advertising is modern art
as well
as it could create
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many
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industries
more employments,
also
these days
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customers
are enjoying advertisement in a visual world.

On the other hand
, despite all the promotions and
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marketing
,
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companies
main priorities should be about the quality of their
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product
, the top-notch commodities and reasonable prices and
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good
promotions will steer the
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Industries
into a successful and
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make
more turnovers,
also
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companies
should not compromise about the quality of
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products
when it
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comes
to markets.
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further
more children can
easily
be influenced
by advertising,
as a result
, it could lead
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some
parents more pressure to
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buy
expensive stocks.
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in
additionally
promoting and
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marketing
fairy
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products
include glamorous and successful
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people
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are involving
this
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product
advertisement may have
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unfavourable
aspects which may split the society discriminated by the
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colour
, the
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government
can solve this issues by giving the sensor to all
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marketing
and advertising.

To conclude
, all individuals are living in a consumer cultural world.
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the
advertising and promotion are essential to the
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industries
,
also
it's could give the awareness of the
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products
and information about the commodities for the
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customers
.
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IELTS essay Marketing and promotions

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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