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Marketing and Promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extend do you agree?

Marketing and Promotion is the key to a successful business. kP2n
According to some experts, it is believed that, marketing and promotion are the most important key factors to run a successful business. I, strongly agree with the declaration and this essay will discuss about this view and will provide a suitable opinion in the end. To begin with, marketing aids to achieve business to be successful. Through marketing, various information can be obtain about the demand of consumers. For instance, an Indian company Jio, did research about the market conditions, and then they came out with 4G internet packages and that company now became one of the leading firm in India. Secondly, promotion also plays a crucial role in victory of business. With this strategy, buyers can acquire sufficient knowledge about the company’s product through various mediums such as television, social sites which can help to run their business in genuine manner. On the other hand, though marketing and sale promotions has many merits to run a business successful, but there are some other factors for this same concept. One of the factor is service. To run a business, businessman needs to provide the supreme quality of services to its customers. To illustrate, company such as Tesla, is one of the immense company of the world and the reason behind their success is their service they furnish to their client. In conclusion, having a successful business is dream of many individuals living on this planet and in my opinion, I personally agree that not only marketing research and advertising can benefit company success but also other factors such as services can guide to become a successful businessman.
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aids to achieve
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to be successful. Through
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, various

information can be
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about the demand of consumers.
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, an Indian
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research about the market conditions, and then they came out with 4G internet packages and that

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company
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now
became one of the leading firm in India.
Secondly
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also
plays a crucial role

in victory of
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business
. With this strategy, buyers can acquire sufficient knowledge about the

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company
’s product through various mediums such as television, social sites which can
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help
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business
in genuine manner.

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merits to run a business

successful,
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other factors for this same concept. One of the factor is
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run a
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business
, businessman needs to provide the supreme quality of
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services
to its customers. To

illustrate,
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such as Tesla, is one of the immense
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company
of the world and the reason

behind their success is their
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service
they furnish to their client.

In conclusion
, having a successful
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business
is dream of
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many
individuals living on this planet and in

my opinion, I
personally
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only
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research and advertising can benefit

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company
success
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but
also
other factors such as
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services
can guide to become a successful

businessman.
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IELTS essay Marketing and Promotion is the key to a successful business.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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