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Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent you agree or disagree.

Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. 7wo5
Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent you agree or disagree. Computers can translate all language in a snap and correctly, learning foreign language is not important. Which I do not think is a good idea the reason to this is there are a lot of advantages learning new language. Numerous of individuals are just rely on the internet when it comes to translating foreign language however there is a lot of benefits to this. Example to these are opportunities to jobs and schools. Of course there are a lot of companies that are accepting employees who has a known foreign language in their resume and having that is plus score to then and have a higher chance to get the job you wish to have Addition to that is you have to know their culture and how important their language to them. While learning their language you become more open to another culture and you widens your knowledge and wisdom to another opinion and shows you a new whole world. Moreover, when talking to their native language you will not dependent on the internet and what if there is no WI-Fi, that is the advantageous of it. They will be glad that they met you and pleased that you help them in some kind of way. Another example of this is when you are in another country since it is not their first language you will be treated good that you know their language and you will not be bad mouthed. In conclusion to this is a lot of country are happy to know that other people are learning their language the reason to this is because some language are dying because no one is teaching them. Along side to that are a lot of opportunities and benefits in learning a new language and not just relying on the web.
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or disagree.

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language
in a snap and
correctly
,
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learning
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foreign
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language
is not
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important
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lot
of advantages
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learning
new language.

Numerous of individuals are
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just
rely on the internet when it
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to translating
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foreign
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language
however
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of benefits to this. Example to these are opportunities to jobs and schools.
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of
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companies
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language
in their resume and having
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get
the job you wish to
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you
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know their culture and how
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important
their
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language
to them. While
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learning
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language
you become more open to another culture and you
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widens
your knowledge and wisdom to another opinion and
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shows
you a new whole world.

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language
you
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will not dependent
on the internet and what if there is no
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to this is a
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lot
of country are happy to know that other
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of opportunities and benefits in
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learning
a new
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language
and not
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just
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IELTS essay Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
326 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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