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Marketing and promotion is key to a successful business. Agree or disagree?

Marketing and promotion is key to a successful business. Agree or disagree? 9LAmw
It can not be denied that many companies spend a colossal amount of money on advertising their products or services. Some people claim that marketing and promotion is the principal reason for a successful business. In my opinion, it is not through advertising to bring the success to a business but also through the quality of products or services to help maintain loyalty of customers. Obviously, marketing and promotion creates a huge impact on selling products or services. Thanks to effective advertising, companies can produce brand awareness to the public, especially the target customers. That is also the reason why so many new or unknown companies employ mass media to publicize their products and establish their position in the market. However, there is another certain that quality of products or services play the equal role in a successful business. After all, no matter how popular the products or services are by using advertising, if they are poor standards then they can not last longer in a competitive market. The consumers now are more conscious and have a lot of other alternative brands to satisfy their standards. Moreover, quality consistency helps build brand credibility of the company and maintain customers’ loyalty to their products. For example, there are a variety of shampoo brands I know and experienced through advertising on television but I have spent my full loyalty to Pentin brand which gives me a satisfaction for many years by its high quality. In conclusion, although we have to admit the necessary of marketing and promotion as it is strategy to attract customers, I strongly believe that a good quality of products and services should also be paid equal attention because it helps companies build the consumers’ trust and the company’s reputation.
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spend a colossal amount of money on advertising their
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or
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services
.
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claim that marketing and promotion is the principal reason for a successful business. In my opinion, it is not through advertising to bring the success to a business
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but
also
through the
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quality
of
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products
or
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services
to
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help
maintain loyalty of customers.

Obviously
, marketing and promotion creates a huge impact on selling
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products
or
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services
. Thanks to effective advertising,
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companies
can produce
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brand
awareness to the public,
especially
the target customers.
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also
the reason why
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so
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many
new or unknown
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companies
employ mass media to publicize their
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products
and establish their position in the market.

However
, there is another certain that
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quality
of
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products
or
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services
play the equal role in a successful business.
After all
, no matter how popular the
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products
or
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services
are by using advertising, if they are poor standards then they can not last longer in a competitive market. The consumers
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now
are more conscious and have
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a lot of
other alternative
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brands
to satisfy their standards.
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,
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quality
consistency
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helps
build
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brand
credibility of the
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company
and maintain customers’ loyalty to their
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products
.
For example
, there are a variety of shampoo
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brands
I know and experienced through advertising on television
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but
I have spent my full loyalty to
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Pentin
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brand
which gives me a satisfaction for
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many
years by its high quality.

In conclusion
, although we
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have to
admit the necessary of marketing and promotion as it is strategy to attract customers, I
strongly
believe that a
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good
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quality
of
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products
and
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services
should
also
be paid
equal attention
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because
it
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helps
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companies
build the consumers’ trust and the
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company’s
reputation.
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IELTS essay Marketing and promotion is key to a successful business. Agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.5
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