At present time, at a first sight, generally people are being judged by their appearance and outer beauty. Hence, mostly the morden generation prefers to keep themselves presentable all the time to the world and some times that results in stressing up themselves with unneccessary financial and physical burdons.
In my country the sitution is same where the adults are so much influenced by the stylish clothes, trendy hairsyle, well shapped body, expensive cosmetics and other things which enhances the person’s look. Recently, a famous film actress had under gone the cosmetic surgery to sharpen her jawline by spending thousands of the money. Eventhough such risky cosmetic surgeries are not physically necessary to be done, film artists and models prefer to do these to maintain their glam over the world.
On the other hand, I believe in to dress up and have a getup according to the place and occasion. For an example, people at work place should dress up withrespect to the work place decorum. Moreover, I believe in keep individual’s self physically fit and healthy. People with heavy weight does not only look disfigured but they are also on a high risk to have serious health issues. Hence, to keep your weight under normal limits is preferable for healthy and beautiful look.
In opinion, people in my country are spending too much money and energy for appearing beautiful that is not requiered all the time. Hence, people should focus on the outer look only if it is requiered. 
At present  
time
, at a  
first
 sight,  
generally
  people
 are  
being judged
 by their appearance and outer beauty.  
Hence
,  
mostly
 the  
morden
 generation prefers to  
keep
 themselves presentable all the  
time
 to the world and  
some
  times
 that results in stressing up themselves with  
unneccessary
 financial and physical  
burdons
.
In my country the  
sitution
 is same where the adults are  
so
 much influenced by the stylish clothes, trendy  
hairsyle
, well  
shapped
 body, expensive cosmetics and other things which enhances the person’s look. Recently, a  
famous
 film actress had  
under gone
 the cosmetic surgery to sharpen her jawline by spending thousands of the money.  
Eventhough
 such risky cosmetic surgeries are not  
physically
 necessary to  
be done
, film artists and models prefer to do these to maintain their glam over the world. 
On the other hand
, I believe in to dress up and have a getup according to the place and occasion. For an example,  
people
 at work place should dress up  
withrespect
 to the work place decorum.  
Moreover
, I believe in  
keep
 individual’s self  
physically
 fit and healthy.  
People
 with  
heavy weight
 does not  
only
 look disfigured  
but
 they are  
also
 on a high  
risk
 to have serious health issues.  
Hence
, to  
keep
 your weight under normal limits is preferable for healthy and  
beautiful
 look.
In opinion,  
people
 in my country are spending too much money and energy for appearing  
beautiful
  that is
 not  
requiered
 all the  
time
.  
Hence
,  
people
 should focus on the outer look  
only
 if it is  
requiered
.