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Many young people find their first day at school difficult because they feel very alone. What do you think are the other difficulties they face on their first day? What can schools do to make them feel more comfortable?

Many young people find their first day at school difficult because they feel very alone. What do you think are the other difficulties they face on their first day? What can schools do to make them feel more comfortable? 0nJj5

I think the students also face a lot of problems like they can't find their classes on the first day at school and they can't locate their classrooms or their teachers. What I think the school should do is to tell the students and the teachers to come to school in 3 days before the school start and the school administration should present the students to each other and the teachers too. Schools should organize orientation sessions starting from the very first day as this would help all newcomers. This would make students feel more at home. Another important fact that new students face is their feeling of independence.

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