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Many Things That Used To Be Done In The Home By Hands Are Now Being Done By Machines

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Nowadays, owing to the proliferation of modern technology more and more number of tasks are being performed by using vivid machinaries replacing the human efforts to complete the work. In my perspective, advantages of increased technology preponderate over the apparent drawbacks. This is essay will discuss both these aspects with substantial evidence in favor of this view.

Nowadays, owing to the proliferation of modern technology more and more number of tasks are being performed
 by using vivid Possible spelling mistake found.machinates
machinaries
 replacing the human efforts to complete the work. In my perspective, advantages of increased technology preponderate over the apparent drawbacks. This is essay will discuss both these aspects with substantial evidence in favor of this view. 

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IELTS essay Many Things That Used To Be Done In The Home By Hands Are Now Being Done By Machines

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

57 words

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5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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