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Many students do not finish schooling why is this and how does this effect

Many students do not finish schooling why is this and how does this effect waw9q

Education is a key to individuals success. People claim that huge number of pupils drop out from their studies/tuition. This essay will analyse the issues connected to dropping out from their academics and it's results First and foremost there are a lot of reasons for the discontinuation of children's academic many school was face financial crisis evidence of this is provided by that the parent are unable to pay the fees of their kids as the academic seems to be expensive they need ample of finance to continue further studies. Besides, some students may not be interested in studying. What this means is lack of interest in subjects restrict students to continue their academic for some Students studies may be difficult task while other may find it easy

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 the issues connected to dropping out from their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturerprofessorscholarstudentacademician
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 and it's results

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 students may not be interested
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