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community less prefered to women sports as compared to men's.

community less prefered to women sports as compared to men's. 7relY
In this modern era, community less prefered to women sports as compared to men's. IN my opinion give advance look to male sports is not fare and the reason for the statement will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. Since, the begenning of the 21st century, media play a significant role due to its profit or TRP. There is no doubt that men's are so agressive in the field during the game. which inlfluence the crowd, such as the promoters also give their attention's for their profit, while on the other side female sports remain quite peaceful such as tennis badminton, that is the reason civilization preffered less toward's the women sports. Moving on the remaining portion, older generation did not allow their girl child for physical activities due to their dress style they feel shameful, or even many of them truly believe that the women are only born to look their houses and their children's. Nextly, Mentality of society shortage of female trainer's people's are not really to send their children for joining sport's acadmey such as certain are feared for crime. Conclusion- After discussing both the notion I truly beleive that women importance as much as the society give's to male's sports.
In this modern era, community less
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women
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as compared to
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's. IN my opinion give advance look to male
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is not fare and the reason for the statement will
be discussed
in upcoming paragraphs.

Since, the
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begenning
of the 21st century, media play a significant role due to its profit or TRP. There is no doubt that
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men
's are
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agressive
in the field during the game.
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which
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inlfluence
the crowd, such as the promoters
also
give their attention's for their profit, while on the other side female
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sports
remain quite peaceful such as tennis badminton,
that is
the reason civilization
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less toward's the
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women
sports.

Moving on the remaining portion, older generation did not
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allow
their girl child for physical activities due to their dress style they feel shameful, or even
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many
of them
truly
believe that the
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women
are
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only
born to look their
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houses
and their children's.
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Nextly
, Mentality of society shortage of female trainer's
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people
's are not
really
to
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send
their children for joining sport's
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acadmey
such as certain
are feared
for crime.

Conclusion- After discussing both the notion I
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women
importance as much as the society give's to male's
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sports
.
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IELTS essay community less prefered to women sports as compared to men's.

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