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many students believe that it is better to study abroad than at local university

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nowadays, education is very important and necessary thing in one's life. With education, we can guarantee a better living and having a chances to secure a good job. Some student prefer to study at local university while many student chooses to study abroad. I agreed that studying abroad is better than studying at the local university. This is because studying abroad teach us to be more independent, gain more experiences and change the way we think.
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and necessary thing in one's life. With education, we can guarantee a better living and having
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to secure a
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job.
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prefer to study at local university while
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many student
chooses to study abroad. I
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that studying abroad is better than studying at the local university. This is
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studying abroad teach us to be more independent, gain more experiences and
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IELTS essay many students believe that it is better to study abroad than at local university

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