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Many students Around The World are not choosing science subjects at University, give reason for that and what are impact on the community?

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It has been proven that many students are staying away from the science because it's complex and the amount of years required to finish the course. In the following essay, I intend to delve into the reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with, current generation is not inclined and fascinated to opt science subjects in their university. One of the reasons would be when they compare with other syllabus science subject consumes more years and it requires effective knowledge whereas others subjects do not require. What I mean by this is that it contains various subjects like physics and chemistry which are a little difficult to understand for the students who have completed their education with basic grade. As a result, pupils tend to prefer other courses which are less complex and easy to obtain the knowledge. In addition, unlike other courses science subject does require more years to acquire the certification whereas other subjects can be completed within one or two years which also alleviate the burden for students paying more money. On the other side, if the students do not show interest on these subjects, it will have a huge impact on science. For instance, we will not have scientists and chemical engineers who are very critical resource for inventing new technologies and vaccinations. Moreover, every year lot of people are facing health difficulties because of loss of support of the medicine and unavailability of human support in hospitals. When there is no professionals from one field, we have to depend on other countries for medicines and also resources have to be imported from other nations to fulfil our country needs and it increases dependency for the country and diminish the revenue. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying, Although it is a difficult subject to learn, it is mandatory for everyone to put efforts to study by considering above mentioned benefits.
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it's complex and the amount of years required to finish the course. In the following essay, I intend to delve into the reasons for this phenomenon.

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generation is not inclined and fascinated to opt
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subjects
in their university. One of the reasons would be when they compare with
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other
syllabus
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science
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subject
consumes more years and it requires effective knowledge whereas others
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subjects
do not require. What I mean by this is that it contains various
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subjects
like physics and chemistry which are a
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little
difficult to understand for the
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students
who have completed their education with basic grade.
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, pupils tend to prefer
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other
courses which are less complex and easy to obtain the knowledge.
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other
courses
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science
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does require more years to acquire the certification whereas
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other
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subjects
can
be completed
within one or two years which
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students
paying more money.

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side, if the
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interest on these
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, it will have a huge impact on
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science
.
For instance
, we will not have scientists and chemical engineers who are
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critical resource for inventing new technologies and vaccinations.

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, every
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year
lot of
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people
are facing health difficulties
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of loss of support of the medicine and unavailability of human support in hospitals. When
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there is no professionals
from one field, we
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depend on
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other
countries for medicines and
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have to
be imported
from
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nations to fulfil our country needs and it increases dependency for the country and diminish the revenue.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying, Although it is a difficult
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subject
to learn, it is mandatory for everyone to put efforts to study by considering above mentioned benefits.
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IELTS essay Many students Around The World are not choosing science subjects at University, give reason for that and what are impact on the community?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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