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It would be wrong to say that closing small shops has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. Some people take the view that closing small shops is a fantastic idea. As opposed to this way of thinking, there are other who believe vice versa. These points will be explained in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion. There is a common assumption in society that small shops are needed everywhere to back this up, allow us to provide an example in this regard. Take a businessman who goes to mall to buy shoes. It is transparent that this person has access to all store and see somethings to buy. As a result of this businessman will make other purchases easily.

It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 to say that closing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shops has not received This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
 take the view that closing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shops is a fantastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. As opposed to this way of thinking, there are Possible agreement error. Did you mean "others"?others
other
 who believe vice versa.

These points will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.

There is a common assumption in society that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shops are needed
 everywhere to back this up, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 us to provide an example in this regard. Take a businessman who goes to mall to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 shoes. It is transparent that this person has access to all store and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 somethings to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 a result of this businessman will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
easily
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