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Globalization is harming people more, rather than doing good. For example, most of the contagious diseases are spreading at an unprecedented faster pace due to advanced global communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Globalization is harming people more, rather than doing good. For example, most of the contagious diseases are spreading at an unprecedented faster pace due to advanced global communication. with this statement? ragnN
Argument goes that globalization made people worse off rather than making them better off; for instance, transmissible diseases can go global due to globalization. This essay disagrees with this argument, and it strongly states that globalization is not harming, rather it is helping us to form united global actions against different adversities. The following paragraphs are going to demonstrate how globalization is helping us more rather than harming. United global response against any adversity is one of the most important gifts of globalization. Countries around the world can easily send food, medical stuffs and other essentials to the affected regions with the blessing of advanced global communication. Though contagious diseases can spread faster due to global connectivity, it's very insignificant comparing the obvious blessings of global integration. For instance, advanced medically equipped countries shared their spontaneous emergency medical support to the nations that became badly affected by the epidemic disease COVID-19. On the other hand, global information exchange is another major blessing of globalization. Using the information from affected regions, other countries can gain important idea about the possible causes and effects of the pandemic disease. Though it might turn into a different scenario if many countries are affected together, still the global information sharing for the events can prevent the worse. For example, most of the countries across the world rapidly shared information on corona virus infection, which helped other nations take necessary preventive measures for themselves and remedial measures for the affected ones. In conclusion, this essay discusses how globalization can facilitate international response to any emergency issues such as pandemic diseases. It also explains the importance of global information exchange which has become possible due to global connectivity. Regardless some drawbacks, this essay does not comply with the statement that argues against globalization, rather it illustrates how the global integration is a blessing for us. "
Argument goes that globalization made
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people
worse off
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rather
than making them better off;
for instance
, transmissible
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diseases
can go
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global
due to globalization. This essay disagrees with this argument, and it
strongly
states that globalization is not harming,
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rather
it is helping us to form united
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global
actions against
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different
adversities. The following paragraphs are going to demonstrate how globalization is helping us more
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rather
than harming.

United
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global
response against any adversity is one of the most
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important
gifts of globalization.
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Countries
around the world can
easily
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send
food, medical stuffs and
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other
essentials to the
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affected
regions with the
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blessing
of advanced
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global
communication. Though contagious
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diseases
can spread faster due to
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global
connectivity, it's
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very
insignificant comparing the obvious
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blessings
of
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global
integration.
For instance
, advanced
medically
equipped
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countries
shared their spontaneous emergency medical support to the nations that became
badly
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affected
by the epidemic
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disease
COVID-19.

On the
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other
hand,
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global
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information
exchange is another major
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blessing
of globalization. Using the
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information
from
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affected
regions,
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other
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countries
can gain
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important
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idea
about the possible causes and effects of the pandemic
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disease
. Though it might turn into a
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different
scenario if
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many
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countries
are
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affected
together,
still
the
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global
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information
sharing for the
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events
can
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prevent
the worse.
For example
, most of the
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countries
across the world
rapidly
shared
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information
on
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
infection, which
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helped
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other
nations take necessary preventive measures for themselves and remedial measures for the
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affected
ones.

In conclusion
, this essay discusses how globalization can facilitate international response to any emergency issues such as pandemic
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diseases
. It
also
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explains
the importance of
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global
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information
exchange which has become possible due to
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global
connectivity. Regardless
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some
drawbacks, this essay does not comply with the statement that argues against globalization,
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rather
it illustrates how the
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global
integration is a
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blessing
for us.
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IELTS essay Globalization is harming people more, rather than doing good. For example, most of the contagious diseases are spreading at an unprecedented faster pace due to advanced global communication. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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