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Love marriages vs arranged marriages

Love marriages vs arranged marriages ragX6
The matter under reference has attracted wide spread notice everywhere that affair marriages are gaining popularity To this as it feels that love marriage On one hand there are people who are in favour of love marriages because they think that these has plethora of advantages Firstly, invariably these marriages boys and girls know each other quite well before marriages so chances of understanding is high Secondly, in most of such marriages age gap is not much so maturity level is same Thirdly, in most of the marriages qualifications are almost the same so ego clashes are less. Further, When both genders they choose each other pressure on parents is less. Moreover, in most of affairs marriages dowry is not there. In love marriages cast do not matter so there will be inter mingling/ blending of culture and traditions. Invariably in these marriages understanding is better so matrimonial disputes are less. Financial status don’t matter in these type of marriages On the other hand there are people who are in favour of arranges Firth and foremost, these marriages parents are always there if there are any problem arises. Normally in arrange marriages religion are same so Less disputes in terms of religion or caste. In the wake of above it can easily and logically concluded that merits of affairs marriages outplay the merits of arrange marriages by miles. i would retrate that this trend should be a encouraged and adopted for the welfare of the society.
The matter under reference has attracted wide spread notice everywhere that affair
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marriages
are gaining popularity

To this as it feels that
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love
marriage

On one hand there are
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people
who are in
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favour
of
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love
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marriages
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because
they
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think
that
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these has
plethora of advantages

Firstly
,
invariably
these
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marriages
boys and girls know each other quite well
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before
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marriages
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so
chances of understanding is high

Secondly
, in most of such
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marriages
age gap is not much
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so
maturity level is same

Thirdly
, in most of the
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marriages
qualifications are almost the same
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so
ego clashes are less.

Further
, When both genders they choose each other pressure on parents is less.

Moreover
, in
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most of affairs
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marriages
dowry is not there.

In
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love
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marriages
cast do not matter
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so
there will be
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inter
mingling/ blending of culture and traditions.

Invariably
in these
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marriages
understanding is better
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so
matrimonial disputes are less.

Financial status don’t matter in these type of marriages

On the other hand
there are
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people
who are in
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favour
of arranges

Firth and foremost, these
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marriages
parents are always there if there are any
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problem
arises.

Normally
in arrange
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marriages
religion are same
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so
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Less
disputes in terms of religion or caste.

In the wake of above it can
easily
and
logically
concluded that merits of affairs
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marriages
outplay the merits of arrange
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marriages
by miles.
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i
would
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retrate
that this trend should be
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encouraged and adopted for the welfare of the society.
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IELTS essay Love marriages vs arranged marriages

Essay
  American English
14 paragraphs
246 words
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