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many people think that we have to focus on the extinction of certain animal species, while other think that we should pay attention to the problem of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Animals and all type of species depend on each other. Every organism performs a major role. Even tiny insects also play an enormous role. A number of people argue that we shall focus on the extinction of certain animal species whelm other consider that we will pay attention to the problem of human being. This essay will highlight the importance of nature things like animals, plants, insects etcetera. Becausewe all depend on each other. Many fauna diversity are on the position of extension. We shall pay attention to this issue. Due to the fact, it is harmful for us and our environment. We should protect our Earth. Government organize many problems and seminars which is based on this issue. Provide information about nature. Certain type of rules publish like hunting is banned, do not throw garbage on open land, some time eat toxic substance.
Animals and all type of species depend on each other. Every organism performs a major role. Even tiny insects
also
play an enormous role. A number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
argue that we shall focus on the extinction of certain animal species whelm other consider that we will pay attention to the problem of human being. This essay will highlight the importance of nature things like animals, plants, insects etcetera.
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Becausewe
all depend on each other.
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Many
fauna diversity are on the position of extension. We shall pay attention to this issue. Due to the fact, it is harmful for us and our environment. We should protect our Earth.
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Government
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "organizes".
organize
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many
problems and seminars which
is based
on this issue. Provide information about nature. Certain type of
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rules
publish like hunting
is banned
, do not throw garbage on open land,
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some
Did you mean "times"?
time
eat toxic substance.

IELTS essay many people think that we have to focus on the extinction of certain animal species, while other think that we should pay attention to the problem of human beings.

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