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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Yes, the technology has changed the people's interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives kaving for. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The Drawback with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones de to insecure meckum of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications, Now the things have changed around, people from for a stance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways which improves the Interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the Interaction between people to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-tec technology which enhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as Internet, Calling Cards etc. The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to tak or to interact at any time anywhere in the world. People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so easier and feriendly to be in touch with your feriends, relatives even with the unknown people.
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wait and try to find easy way to
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their friends or relatives
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kaving
for. In past there was no quick
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technology
to
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contact
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communication
between one person to another person. The Drawback with past
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systems was that it were
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slow and were
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communication
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their
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improves
the Interaction level between two
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, has
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are equipped
with
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high-tec
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technology
which enhances the
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. There are
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medium which are available
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now
such as Internet, Calling Cards etc.

The
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has provided the mobility faster which
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help
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people
to
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tak
or to interact at any
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time
anywhere in the world.

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can
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contact
their friend or relatives any
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time
they want. It has become
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easier and
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, relatives even with the unknown
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IELTS essay Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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