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Learning foreign languages cab be a really tough process.

Learning foreign languages cab be a really tough process. Nevertheless, learning directly in the environment of native speakers can facilitate and speed up this process. However, some people argue that living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. I disagree with this point of view to a certain extent. The reasons of it I will discuss further. Obviously, once in the environment, we have no choice but gradually start talking in a foreign language. That’s why It’s a well-known practice to communicate with native speakers to master the language. So, living in another country could really advance your language level. However, we shouldn’t forget that moving to another country can be a very stressful factor, so at first it is worth taking special care of your mental health and not interrupting communication with loved ones, even if they stayed in another country. Another argument supporting my point of view is that in almost any country there are people who find themselves in a similar situation or who are simply ready to help, understanding how difficult it can be for you to socialize and establish everyday life. So, in any situation, you can find help and support, and therefore avoid social and practical issues. Nevertheless, mentality of different countries is different, so it is worth considering the fact that your idea of support and communication may differ from the ideas of people in the country you are moving to. Thus, I believe that social and practical problems may appear due to living among people who speak foreign language. Though, the main point is that it’s in your own hands to surround yourself with people who will help you to assimilate into new society.
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argue that living in a
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country
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have to
speak a foreign
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language
can cause serious

social and practical problems. I disagree with this point of view to a certain extent. The reasons

of it I will discuss
further
.

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, once in the environment, we have no choice
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but
gradually
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start
talking in a foreign

language. That’s why It’s a well-known practice to communicate with native speakers to master

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language
.
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, living in another
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country
could
really
advance your
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language
level.

However
, we shouldn’t forget that moving to another
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country
can be a
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very
stressful factor,
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at
first
it is worth taking special care of your mental health and not interrupting communication

with
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loved
ones, even if they stayed in another country.

Another argument supporting my point of view is that in almost any
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country
there are
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people


who find themselves in a similar situation or who are
simply
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help
, understanding how

difficult it can be for you to socialize and establish everyday life.
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So
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find
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help
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countries
is
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so
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idea
of support and communication may differ from the
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ideas
of
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people
in the

country you are moving to.

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people
who

speak foreign
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language
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own
hands to surround

yourself with
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people
who will
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help
you to assimilate into new society.
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IELTS essay Learning foreign languages cab be a really tough process.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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