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Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later.

Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. b3MjX
Nowadays, lot of opportunities are available and people can choose whatever the like. There are many field which is very useful for people to make beautiful and strong career. Lot of people think about to choose career early to become a successful specialist. I agree with this statement, I think it is good for our future, and earn money while develops our life good. To begin with, it is necessary to do job and make good life, so it is very important to choose perfect career. When kids are in the schools they make some big goal, which they are achieved in future. Moreover, they have a goal to do something, so they do lot of hard work to reached their goal. For example, when my friend will become a doctor which she has decided in their childhood, so she has a big achieved in their life, when she became a doctor. Therefore, they train themselves from very young age to become successful people. On the other hand, people have a good knowledge and experience to make decision at their young age. Consequently, they have a good job and they live a life happy because they decide their goal. There are lot of fields which has chosen by kids in their school time, and they have a strong goal to do something. Furthermore, there are lot of jobs which give good satisfaction, and people do that type of job which they like. However, some people create their target when they are children. In conclusion, it is important to make goal when we were child because it is good our future. Although, there are several advantages to choose career early age because it is become happy future life.
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IELTS essay Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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