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giong festival in vietnam

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Giong Festival is a festival which is held annually in many places in Viet Nam to commemorate and praise for the deeds of Saint Giong. Every year, this festival takes place in many local places in the honor of one of the most well-known heroes in Viet Nam – Saint Giong. There are two most famous kinds of Giong festivals in Ha Noi: Soc Son Giong Festival and Phu Dong Giong Festival. Especially, Phu Dong Giong festival is considered to be the World Intangible cultural heritage by UNESCO. This festival simulates the battles of Saint Giong as well as Van Lang people against An enemy. This festival is one of the most popular traditional festivals in Viet Nam. It preserves the value of VietNam history.
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IELTS essay giong festival in vietnam

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