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Global top 4 coffee producing countries from 2011 to 2013 (in 1000 units)

Global top 4 coffee producing countries from 2011 to 2013 (in 1000 units) Owk87

The bar chart below shows data about the percentage of coffee produced in top four nations namely Brazil, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia all over world between 2011 and 2013. Overall, It is clear that, during the period of 3 years saw an upward trend in all four nations. In addition, the coffee produced in Brazil was highest over the time. The years 2011 witnessed the figure for producing coffee in Brazil at 42000, as opposed to 10000 in Colombia. Then one year later, the figure for that in Brazil increased production of Brazil and it was five times as much as that of Colombia. For Vietnam, the figure for coffee produced in 2011 stood at around 230000 units, in comparison with approximately 10000 in Indonesia. In the next year, a moderate decline to 22000 was seen in the output of Vietnam, whereas that of Indonesia rose to 11000 units. That figure of Indonesia still unchanged in 2013, but it grew dramatically to 28000 units in Vietnam at the same time.

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shows
 data

about the percentage of coffee

produced in top four nations namely


Brazil, Vietnam, Indonesia and

Colombia all over world between

2011 and 2013.

Overall
, It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, during the

period of 3 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 an upward

trend in all four nations. In addition
,

the coffee produced in Brazil was

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highest
 over the time.

The years 2011 witnessed the figure

for producing coffee in Brazil at

42000, as opposed to 10000 in

Colombia. Then one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 later, the

figure for that in Brazil increased production of Brazil and it was five

times as much as that of Colombia.

For Vietnam, the figure for coffee

produced in 2011 stood at around

230000 units, in comparison
 with

approximately 10000 in Indonesia.

In the next
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year
, a moderate decline

to 22000 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the output of

Vietnam, whereas that of Indonesia

rose to 11000 units. That figure of

Indonesia still
 unchanged in 2013,

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but
 it grew dramatically
 to 28000

units in Vietnam at the same time. 