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Many people think that home cooked food is healthy. But many people still prefer to eating out why is it so? Provide specific reasons and example with your opinion. v.1

Many people think that home cooked food is healthy. But many people still prefer to eating out why is it so? Provide specific reasons and example with your opinion. v. 1
It is an undeniable fact that food contains suppliments and minerals, which is an essential for the human body. Although there are numerous people who eat unhealthy food, instead of knowing the importance of home made food. I firmly agree to the given statement and the reasons for it will be elaborated in the enlisted paragraphs. From my practical stand point, first and foremost reason of this trend, is varities of dishes. In other words, people can eat multi cuisine food, which gives them different taste as well as flavours, and change from their monotonous home made meals. Furthermore, the masses get information about new ingredients that are used in out side food. For instance, pizzas contain different spices like oregano and jalapeno this things give delicious taste. Secondly, the offers and discounts that lures people to eat in hotels or streets. This is because, people usually getting cashback offers and discounts on their plastic money, which encourages them to eat their favorite dishes or new eateries. Moreover, they get buy one buy free offers on their junk foods. Thus, enormous available food iteams and the promotion offers motivate the masses to consum oily food. Finally, most of people are working in present time and they have hectic schedule thus no time to made cook food. whereas, in this case easy mode of out street food. firstly, there are many hotels are availabe wide range of food and this mode easy and very convenient to all food available. But, this junk foods are harmful effect on our body. For example, nowadays people are working 9 hours and 1 hour travel in traffic after they have no time to made food. Hence, they do not have time to cook meal for themselves and for family. In conclusion, it is truly said that home food is far more Heather than street food, but people consume it. Nonetheless, the factors that are affecting this trend is the invent of dishes from around the world, and offers and discounts along with this hectic work schedules these are reasons for the eating out.
It is an undeniable fact that
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food
contains
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suppliments
and minerals, which is an essential for the human body. Although there are numerous
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people
who
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eat
unhealthy
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food
,
instead
of knowing the importance of home made
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food
. I
firmly
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agree
to the
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given
statement and the reasons for it will
be elaborated
in the enlisted paragraphs.

From my practical stand point,
first
and foremost reason of this trend, is
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varities
of dishes.
In other words
,
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people
can
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eat
multi cuisine
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food
, which gives them
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different
taste
as well
as
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flavours
, and
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change
from their monotonous home made meals.
Furthermore
, the masses
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get
information about new ingredients that are
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used
in
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out side
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food
.
For instance
, pizzas contain
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different
spices like oregano and
'jalapeno' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "jalapeño"
jalapeno
this things give delicious taste.
Secondly
, the
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offers
and discounts that lures
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people
to
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eat
in hotels or streets. This is
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because
,
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people
usually
getting cashback
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offers
and discounts on their plastic money, which encourages them to
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eat
their favorite dishes or new eateries.
Moreover
, they
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get
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buy
one
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buy
free
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offers
on their junk
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foods
.
Thus
, enormous available
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food
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iteams
and the promotion
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offers
motivate the masses to
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consum
oily food.

Finally
, most of
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people
are working in present
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time and
they have hectic schedule
thus
no
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time
to made cook
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food
.
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whereas
,
in this case
easy mode of out street
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food
.
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firstly
, there are
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many
hotels are
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availabe
wide range of
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food
and this mode easy and
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very
convenient to all
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food
available.
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But
, this junk
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foods
are harmful effect on our body.
For example
, nowadays
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people
are working 9 hours and 1 hour travel in traffic after they have no
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time
to made
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food
.
Hence
, they do not have
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time
to cook meal for themselves and for family.

In conclusion
, it is
truly
said that home
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food
is far more Heather than street
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food
,
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but
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people
consume it. Nonetheless, the factors that are affecting this trend is the
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invent
of dishes from around the world, and
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offers
and discounts along with this hectic work schedules these are reasons for the eating out.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people think that home cooked food is healthy. But many people still prefer to eating out why is it so? Provide specific reasons and example with your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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